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* Update : I deleted the under-arm fur and improve the netbook. -- [[LaunchpadHome:adrien-pilleboue]] <<DateTime(2009-05-22T09:27:53Z)>> |
The Koala by Adrien Pilleboue (necropotame)
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The "animals shadow" looks a bit scary, evil. Another color and friendlier eyes could change that. -- t-w-
Good work on the 2nd poster, with colored animals. I think you should try to vary the eye shapes a bit and try a version without eyes. The shape of the jackalope needs work, it shouldn't bend forward so much at the lower left. The slogan should be with "has", not "have", but just "Good Karma" would be best. -- t-w- 2009-05-18 17:36:43
- I've tried without eyes, but it's not good. However, I've upload a new version of koala karma. Eyes are now differents for each animals.
As already stated, the black and white one looks a bit too intense with the shape of the eyes, which is corrected in the color version. I think the black and white does look better, as it draws the focus to the koala, rather then the previous versions of Ubuntu. tylerbrainerd 2009-05-21 18:14:32
It's ok. I replaced eyes into the dark version. -- adrien-pilleboue 2009-05-22 09:27:53
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Keep it up, great work so far -- sidi 2009-05-20 12:57:00
Excellent work. BTW, please specify a license like you can see on the Backgrounds page. Consider posting to the mailing list, as not everyone monitors the wiki and more people should see this! -- t-w- 2009-05-20 12:18:48
The under-arm fur looks odd from a gravity perspective. -- melissa 2009-05-20 12:42:09
Update : I deleted the under-arm fur and improve the netbook. -- adrien-pilleboue 2009-05-22 09:27:53
washburnello
Hello, I'm new but liked your work and thought I'd play around with it. I changed the Jackalope to 9.04 and gave it more of a meditative feel i think. Trash it if you like cause like I said, I was just playing with it. --washburnello 2009-05-18 15:02:35
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Artwork/Incoming/Karmic/MeditatingKoala (last edited 2009-09-09 09:37:43 by yoda2031)