MeditatingKoala
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The Koala
My vision about a karmic koala.
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Very nice work on the koala. You shouldn't rotate the Ubuntu logo. I understand why you did it, but it should always appear in the exact same way. Also, make it a tad larger and try a version without. The "animals shadow" looks a bit scary, evil. Another color and friendlier eyes could change that. -- t-w- 2009-05-18 16:21:14
Good work on the 2nd poster, with colored animals. I think you should try to vary the eye shapes a bit and try a version without eyes. The shape of the jackalope needs work, it should bend forward so much at the lower left. The slogan should be with "has", not "have", but just "Good Karma" would be best. -- t-w- 2009-05-18 17:36:43